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Lying in My Bed by ~alixana:iconalixana:



Lying in my bed
I sit and ponder
About where life will take me
The plans set out for me
Are ones I must fulfill
Havoc would arise if I fall
Be this…do that
Find the “one”
Be “happy”
Their “happy” is what they  want
Nothing else matters
My dreams are only a memory
Put aside until I’m old, ugly and grey
Making others happy is what is correct
My happiness flows off of theirs
A robot is what I am
Programmed to be perfect
When reality shows it is all a façade
They have the controls to my life
And the muscles to my mouth
For if they knew
That I wasn’t to program my own life
Disaster would lead to pain
And then I’d be
Lying in my bed
And I’d sit up and ponder
Why life took me this way
©2004-2009 ~alixana
:iconalixana:

Author's Comments

it's about some people's lives..and how they don't control it themselves

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:iconladystephi:
wow, another very powerful piece! I love it! Its just strange, some of those words seem to ring home alot.

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Chocolate is the cure for everything . . . except weight loss.
:iconalixana:
oh yeah...well..that's the best way to do that...*sigh*
:iconangelsbane:
wow this is a very unique outlook.... i loveit....:+fav:

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:sadangel:

"I loved you ......................once"
:iconalixana:
thnx a bunch :D...heh heh yeah my life has a great outlook..lol...or something...
:iconangelsbane:
well i hope you keep something cuz it makes for good writing... i much likes....=)

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:sadangel:

"I loved you ......................once"
:iconalixana:
yeah i'll keep something that is for sure..thanks for liking it :D
:iconangelsbane:
no no no no thank you for writng......=) I love to find people who write what they really feel......=)

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:sadangel:

"I loved you ......................once"
:iconalixana:
heh yeah..that's basically my poetry..unless it's for liek something like skool..etc.
:iconangelsbane:
well that is cool...... looking foward to more....=)

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:sadangel:

"I loved you ......................once"

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